I just wanted advice from an expert geeze isnt that why you are here to help us in a friendly way, I looked up to you being so good at what you do thats why i wanted you to be one of my administrators to help me along the way. I know my work is not perfect but does everything has to be.
If you want somebody's approval, you have to get them to like whatever you want them to approve.
If whatever that is doesn't appeal to them, but yet you still want their approval, the logical step is to improve.
To improve requires directioned change.
Directioned change requires admitting of flaws and plans to fix the flaws.
The essence of critique, whether from yourself or from the second party (the person you want the approval of) or even a third party, is the awknowledgement of flaws. The essence of good critique is advice on how to fix the flaws, because it offers directioned change.
So, if one wants to gain another's approval for something, and the person does not feel they can approve it, yet the first person still wants the thing to be approved by the second person, then the logical thing to do is to take critique and utilize it appropriately.
Getting angry at critique is not only hurtful to the person who offered it, but it also never ends up helping the person who wishes to improve whatever it is they created. They never take the critique seriously because they are angry at it, and thus don't take into account any of it's helpful points. Furthermore, it does this person no favors in gaining a positive repor amongst others who may want to help, as they fear if they offer their opinion, they will be met with a similar anger as the first critiquer was met with. In fact, these people may respond with anger whenever the person who wishes to improve asks for their opinion, as a preliminary procedure against a possible outburst of spite. They may also react in anger in order to defend those who have been, in their opinion, treated cruelly. This in turn will provoke more anger from the other side, creating a vicious cycle of tits and tats.
For the sake of all of our emotional and spiritual health, would this just stop?
Spkavyia2012, no matter how much you ask him, Per Ankh will not want to be a part of your website. He dislikes you. He has interpreted your refusal to listen to his desires (his desire to not allow his character into your story, his desire for you to stop posting too many pages, his desire for you to leave him alone) as an act of cruetly on your side. He believes you refuse to respect him and his wishes, and as such, has reacted in order to deny you of any respect he may have for you or your wishes.
He has seen the many times you have reacted with anger against others who offered their opinions about your writing, and how you will spite them. For example, the way you said that I needed to 'check my own mistakes before I go around criticizing others', or how you said that Prof. Draco only had friends over the web. The list of hurtful things you have said to others just goes on. We have reacted to defend ourselves from unnecessary battery. You have reacted because you didn't like our honesty.
For those reasons, and a few more I'm sure Per Ankh could up with, would you please stop trying to get Per Ankh onto your site? He doesn't wish to be a part of it, and every effort you make further pushes him away from you.
I'm sure you're a great person. I really am. I'm sure you are super popular, with loads of friends and a great life, and yes, perfection isn't everything. But none of that really means that you're better than someone who isn't that way, or that perfection isn't something we can't try to attain. And until people here believe that you can accept that we're trying to build each other up to reach the stars and not offering advice to tear one down, no one here is going to want to try and help you. If you don't want our advice, that's fine as well. Just please, if you don't want it, don't put out your material in a place that is going to garner our critique (i.e. the Wiki).
I know that, most likely, you'll respond to this like you've responded to any other of my critiques for you. With anger, with spite...but understand, I don't really care if you hate me. I don't really care if you call me a 'minion' of Per Ankh, or a cyber bully (because I'm not, thank you. I'm standing up to one, right now), or a lonely nerd who only sits in front of his computer all day because he isn't 'super popular' with 'loads of friends' and 'who plays football'. I don't care, because no matter how cruelly your respond to my honesty, I don't back down from being honest.
Click the Source mode button; it allows copying and pasting without that irritating "browser security" thingy. Another reason I don't care for Spkavyja is from the part of me that is a writer: He repeatedly ignores basic rules of grammar.
Ah, I didn't know that. Thank you for giving me that helpful clue.
I understand. Spakavyia2012, would you care to kindly let us know why you don't appear to wish to change your writing to make it more cohesive and grammatical? And if you'd rather post on my wall about this, I'd be happy to have this conversation with you there - I'm sure Per Ankh doesn't want a discussion of this sort to be occuring on his wall, what with the strong potential for too many notifications.
Jesus Christ your a lier per ankh. You have been saying mean comments on peoples page way before i came along for example
You sent this one to Rmhanshaw158 Dude, two words: "Grammar" and "Spelling" keep an eye on those. Thank you!, Also, learn to link properly. You are annoying others the first message was sent on 18:21, July 24, 2012. Way before i became a member. Way more than that. I am not a bully when i first got started you guys had to say negative comments when i didn't even know. I did say wrong things but you guys are the jerks who started the flame and cant put out the fire.
Tell the truth you over use your power as admin. But i do not dislike you more than Prof. Draco because what he tells people is horrible. Your idea of me being super popular is so untrue. I might play football and have many friends but i love the computer and video games but i still stay active.
Scalec i am not going to say anything bad about your speech because if i took this to court i would win when i shwed them you guys first comments. As i said before i dont hate anyone but Prof. Draco.
Your honesty your honesty let me tell ya something fella's simon cowell said his honesty and a girl killed herself. Also defending yourself from unnesceary battery 5 members were jumping on me like i was fresh meat. Every time i posted something you guys Had something negative to say and i was fed up with you guys garbage. I had showed many people my work and there was no down talking. I dont critisize others im not no other member i will not stand for you PEOPLE pounding on me im gonna stand up and tell the truth even when it hurts. If you cant take what i have to say you shouldn't of dished out the bull you had to say.
Thank you and have a nice day. Please and thankyou with a cherry and whip cream on top. Also tell Prof. Draco I FEEL SORRY FOR HIS PARENTS.
Oh, the irony. You tell us you're going to tell the truth even if it hurts as you criticize us for doing the same. By the way, I don't care what you say about me. I don't know you as a person and hopefully never will. Thus, nothing you say has any impact on me or anyone else here and if you were sensable instead of a repressed fifteen year old seeking approval like I suspect you are, you wouldn't care either. So far, you've made no good impressions on anyone on either of these wikis. Blaming us for that is only digging yourself deeper. If you wanted us to think positively of you, you should have been a politer, more agreeable person. As it is, I'm happy to see you go. And as far as the comparison to Cowell goes, thank you. I appreciate the compliment.
WE DO HAVE SOMETHINGS ALIKE I LOVE POKEMON MORE THAN ANYTHING ALIKE I HAVE LOTS OF CARDS, MOVIES, TOYS IN MY CLOSET. BUT I STILL PLAY THE VIDEO GAME IT IS SO SO FUN MY FAVORITE KANTO POKEMON IS GROWLITHE, JOHTO BLISSEY, HOENN BEAUTIFLY, SINNOH PROBOPASS, AND UNOVA IS BRAVIARY. IF I COULD CREATE MY OWN POKEMON IT WOULD BE DITTOZEALEN THE EVOLVED FORM OF DITTO. I LOVED POKEMON SINCE I WAS FOUR. IT IS SOMETHING I WILL LOVE FOR YEARS TO CONTINUE YOU GOT THAT ON ME.
The wind seems to have forgotten that Dragon-types are SUPPOSED to take forever to evolve, due to being the most powerful type. Deino will only evolve if you don't press a button during evolution after clicking A to remove the "Pokemon is evolving" box. It evolves at 50, and again at 64.
Yay, science. A moment of pity now. Deino evolves at level 50, which you should know if you checked the internet. If it hasn't, it may be holding an everstone, be hacked or maybe it doesn't like you. I don't mean as in happiness, I mean maybe the data in your game cartridge gained sentience and doesn't like you.
I don't care much for competitve battling. I can't be bothered with stats and the like. Although I did once accidently make a perfect Rhyperior tank. It withstood a surf from a friends Manaphy that had used 3 tail-glows and had maxed Sp.Attk EV. Then I tried using Horn Drill and missed. Still, I was impressed.
Ghost types are marvelous, I must admit. But I have a very special place in my heart for Dark types. I suppose nowadays that's pretty cliche, but I still have that fantasy of being the first Dark-type Gym Leader.
It is long overdue, though. Gamefreak can't put it off forever. My main interest is wether it will be a standalone generation like 5 or have evolution chains continue like 1-4. I'm hoping for Jynx, Qwilfish and Dunsparse to get a little attention there.
Bleh, she's such an underappreciated character I forgot her name. What does that tell you about the state of dark type users. And I know the one you're talking about, I think. It was made for Pokemon Acanthite, a fan project that's been in development for a while now and has started to pick up again recently. Look it up, it looks quite promising.
Karen was the fourth Elite Four Member in the Indigo Plateau in the second generation (Gold, Silver, and Crystal), as well as the second generation remakes (HeartGold and SoulSilver). She was a Dark-type specialist.
Well, I saw a great video on Youtube the other day that critically examined what we can take from the brief preview we had. The guy offered a great idea that, if the pattern with the name continues and the third game turns out to be Pokemon Z, then it may be a reference to the 3D system - Axes X, Y, Z making the 3 dimensional model.
Although I'm sure you knew that, now that I reread that.
I know he's flooded my Warehouse 13 Wiki and Warehouse 13 Artifact Database talk page with requests to see his work, I have been leaniant over his or her messages to me and others, you, Per Ankh and Scelic (sorry I misspelt) are regular users to this wiki and the other. 2012 was new and started this stuff, you guys tryed to help but I guess it was no dice. I will have to side with Prof. Draco, Per Ankh and Scelic (sorry I misspelt again)